Hey guys,
Here is the place where you show your latest writing your've done. I will also add a few that you guys have done that I find interesting and inspiring. Only a few. It's up to you to post them up, so not all will be posted.
Sincerely,
mhm
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I'm going to start a chapter book today. I'll try to keep adding to it every day but there is no guaruntee.
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The ZRW Squad
BLURB
You may think that zombies,robots and werewolves don't exist, well they do and are the beginning of this story. Imagine if you met some guy and he tells you he's a zombie, how would you react? Well in this story this happens to a teenaged girl named Alex, she now has to deal with keeping the secret of the ZRW squad. Will she keep the secret or will the squad be hunted down?
@Papple: That's great! Can't wait to start reading it.
THANK YOU! I thought it was to dramatic. From,
Papple
Hi everybody I'm leaving for Tae Kwon Do but when I get back I promise you a nice decent size price of text.
By the way Papple nice blurb and MHM I read your first chapter on legendary hosted. And I have got one word.
GREAT!!!!!!!!!
Thanks rapdor5/6. I can't wait!
This is my 1st chapter of The ZRW Squad hope you like it!:) There is alot
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Chapter 1
" Don't forget your lunch Alex", Alex's mum said to her holding out the lunchbag."I'll eat it, it's okay". I lied. I was going to throw in the bin at school. How would she know if I did it? As I was walking to school today I saw somebody crossing the road. It looked like he had just pulled his arm off hit the car with it then walked briskly foward. I must be hullucinating. So I walked up to the guy, he looked the same age as me at least 16 years, I'm going to ask him why took his arm off hit a car with it, put it back on and ran away. " Hey, you, yeah you. Come over here!" I say in my scariest, meanest voice. The guy points to himself. "Yeah you, come here!" He nodded as if he could not talk. " Did you just pull your arm off and hit the cars?" He lowered his head in shame. He puts his head up. It's like he was motioning me to come. He walks over to a tree with a dog bowl under it that said 'What Zebra?' He pressed the Z the R and the W in that order. The tree had this trapdoor pop open out of it there was a slide in there. The guy pushes me in. "EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!" The ride suddenly stopped. He came out the shoot after me. He starts walking . He was walking slower than what he was doing outside and seemed to be dragging around a foot. I walk into this room all the lights are off. All I can see is a pair of two yellow glowing eyes. A robot in a corner turns the lights on. The guy shakes his head. The man with the glowing eyes howled. " Welcome to the ZRW squad!" He said excitedly. " The what squad?" I say. He writes on the board saying at the same time "ZRW squad". " My names Jake I'm a werewolf" said Jake. "MY NAMES KOREY I'M A ROBOT" said the robot in the corner in a robot voice. The guy I met walks slowly over to the board he writes on the board: 'I'm Henry a zombie, I'm a mute the only sound I make is when I'm attacking'. His writing was so messy that Jake had to read it out because it was such bad writing. "I think this has gone from being late for school to something much weirder!"
Hello my friend this is the username that will stay for ever untiol the day I leave (which won't be anytime soon:D). By the you guy can coment on my picture It's the best I've ever seen. :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
My brother has a USB powered nose so you know everyone it is really cool and he has a blender, fan, stapler and lime milkshake dispenser attachments for it.
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Papple, the first chapter of your book is awesome!
@ Papple: Wow!
Guys, remember if you want to chat, go to the 'Welcome' topic. This is for your writing you've done and commenting on it.
Thanks guys!
Here's chapter 2
The ZRW Squad
Chapter 2
Alex walks around every corner of the room. She walks over to Henry."Undead, ehhh", Alex said mysteriosly. Henry wrote on the board: 'pull my finger'." This isn't one of those jokes were you fart, is it?" Henry shakes his head. Alex pulls his grey, warty finger, it cracks then came completly off. "EWWW, EWWW, EWWWWW!" Alex screams. She drops the finger and runs to the robot. "Robotic hey", Alex looks Korey in the eye."100% madam" Korey replies. She grabs the robots arm and runs around the room, it followed. Korey pressed the button above the arm Alex pulled, as came back to its normal size Korey said, "How rude". Alex giggled. She turned to Jake, torch in hand. " NO, don't do it, I always feel funny after it happens". Alex turns the torch on and shines it in his eyes. Jake howled, crouched a little and growled, his eyes as big as moons. Alex turns off the torch, afraid of what Jake would do next. "I just needed to know" said Alex.
Papple that is amazing nice work!
Thanks AZZA!
I'll post chapter 3 soon need to remember to bring the book home!
The vampires assistant
Chapter 1
The flyer
hi my name is Erik Sylvester I'm 16 I like snakes and spiders I'm an A grade student that has never got in trouble whilst my best friend on the other hand is a trouble maker his name is Steven Ellsworth he's obsessed with bats and vampires it's as if bats are in his blood while snakes and spiders are in my blood. He’s only my friend because once in grade two this kid was picking on me and he punched the bully in the face now we’re in grade 11 and I’m 16.
Bring, bring goes the school bell as we head inside to go to class but just as I was about to enter the classroom for English Steven grabs me by the shoulder and says “hey come to the roof with me” as I explain to him that I can’t he says “what can’t do anything without your parents’ permission” so out of anger I walk past the door and follow him to the roof then he picks up some rock and starts to throw them at a glass orb shaped thing after a few goes he gives a couple of the rocks to me and says “why don’t you have a go” I think for a second then get up from an old bean bag that had been left up there and have a go the glass orb smashes whilst we were doing this down stairs the English teacher heard the glass smash, and comes up to find both me and Steven that night my parents find out.
“you where such a good kid on a path to success but that Steven kid he pulled you off that path” says my mum grabbing for another tissue, “your not to hang out with Steven anymore” says my dad in his angriest voice. The next day I tell Steven what had happened the night before “so what does that mean we’re not friends anymore” says Steven, “well not completely we can still be friends just as long as my parents don’t know we can be friends” I say reassuringly, than Steven says “so I’m your friend, but I’m your secret friend, great!”. That day in class the teacher walks past and places a pink and green flyer on my desk as he says “this came for you I hope you know that’s illegal and aren’t going to attend”… until the next chapter the freak show
Great, this is going to be hard to decide the winner of the comp!
These are great everyone, I think I might make mini certifitcates for the people you enter the comp.
Can someone tell me who 'MISS MANGO' is?
You guys rock at writing!Keep it up
it me azza by the way
There I see it,
I greatly fear it,
With skin peircing teeth
Strong and wholesome,
Always lonesome,
With a radient look upon his face
His coat is really hairy,
His look is really scary,
Shadow in the night
He brings very much fright,
He finds his food in the night,
All up I fear him, the great grizzly bear
MISS MANGO is MISS N 5/6 she just changed her name. You should check out her blog.
I'm just about to post my story on the admin com
HaHa lucky! I have decided as it is the first week, entries will close tonight so I can make decide the winner and make the certificates.
mhm,
you should ask if you can hand them out at the award ceromony on monday
Papple
What a great idea! I think I have decided the winner.........
I can't wait to hear who the winner is. Please go faster modelhorsemad5/6
who are you crazygirl106
paple when will you post your third chapter in your book
HaHa, I have already decided (I think). carzygirl106 is Countney. I am not sure when papple's next chapter will come out. Do you want to read chapter 2 on Legendary Horses? I am putting it up now.
Alrighty, the winner has been anounced!
Yes crazygirl106 is Courtney, but who is the winner Awesomeness 5/6?
Oh and the day I needed to bring the book home I couldn't because it was interview night.
That's fine. I believe that the winner, The Awsomeness5/6 is Bryan. Correct me if I'm wrong.
Can we start entering the new things early, I've finished making my poem I just need to post it.
I want to write it in here so that people can see it but they probably will copy it.
Yes, it's open so you may post. If I don't wish for people to post I will have it so you can see the posts but can't post anything.
YAY! I've entered it to let you know.
How do you find out how many people have seen your blog 'cause I wanna know so I can do it?
I just went to designs.
Why won't my followers come up, and why won't let me follow certain blogs. Hmmm.
oh I find that a little while ago.
I wanna type my poem into here aswell, so I will. Here it is:
He's from the worst place,
He's worse than Grace.
With that triangular shape on his tail.
He looks around,
to find a town.
His teeth that make everyone pale.
He'll strike you down,
He'll make you frown,
In bad deeds he'll revel.
You'll greatly fear him,
so don't go near him.
The killer Jersey Devil.
That's it hoped you liked it.
Remember Papple, please try to make my life a tiny bit easier and also post it in the Admin Comp topic just above, that one is where all entries go, as a memory of great writing from our class :p
kk
Seeya gonna go play violin :)
See you Papple.
lol, no one has posted any Persuasive Text yet xD
Lol, Yes! I worked out since we are playing chicken in the kitchen on violin I thought because I have played the song on violin before with my old teacher I would see if the song on the cd would work even if the notes are completely different the harmonize. It works, HOORAY! :)
Hey I like the quote of the week! :)
Maybe I'm gonna go and write in persuasive text.
Yay! I am going to put my Show Case topic up when I finish typing it ;)
My ones about pit bulls
was the winner awesomeness 5/6
Yup
Yes, that is this weeks winner.
Oooh look I got a pic like mhm's!
But different.
Yeah, but your's says glitterfly :p (I was experimenting with my first one)
Hey I want to make a website like mhm's any good suggestions that you guys think I should use?
Hi guys this is the first chapter of my book that i wrote a few days ago
GHOST CAT
Emily woke up to her mum calling 'breakfast' one morning then she remembered that it was her birthday in two months and she was very excited. Emily walked down the stairs, the sun shining through the window into her eyes. She sat down to her ready made breakfast when her mum asked 'what do you want for your birthday?' 'a cat' Emily replied. When she had finished her breakky she went straight outside to her pet horse, Charlotte. Emily went back inside to get a saddle then came back out again.She threw the saddle on Charlotte's back and hopped on. Her and her horse Charlotte rode through the woods,the wind blowing through Emily's long, brown, silky hair. Sudddenly Charlotte came to a halt.
Hope you liked it. i will put my next chapter up soon,
Miss Mango
You need to be over 11 or is it 12 ;)
What do you mean MHM?
I think she might be talking to me MISS MANGO I asked for good programs to make websites with. lol. BTW your story is awesome just to let you know...
Oh so thats why i did not know what she meant teehee. Thx papple, by the way!
miss mango is me, Niamh!
Yep, me have figured that out ;)
your so funny 'mhm'!
hey 'mhm', i have just been on horwse and i have one question... how do you become a groom? just wondering. see ya, going to try & figure that out.
Which version are you on? You should join the Aus version, that's where I am modelhorsemad otherwise if you are on the international version I am soccormad ;)
Go to Profile>My Job> and just choose a job ;)
Thanks sooooooooo much mhm. you helped ALOT! (im not being sarcastic)
Miss Mango
Hello mhm,
It's been a while since I saw you and I wanted to say hi!
GUESS WHAT!
I'm in year seven dance troupe whoop whoop!!!
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